Descriptive Reflection: The Importance of English for Me
I had always been more of an English-speaking individual, be
it within my family or with my peers. I did not excel very much in my mother
tongue despite having many mandarin-speaking counterparts within my family members
and peers.
I remembered drafting an email to URA regarding an invalid summon on
my car for being stationary at the roadside. I was, however, present in the
vehicle waiting to pick someone up. From my past experiences with
letter-writing and the proper formats, I managed to construct an intricate and
formal appeal letter, which I emailed to URA. A few days later, I received an email from
URA, stating that the summon had been voided as my reasoning was valid.
This
was just one of the many examples cited to emphasize the importance of English.
In this aspect, the past experience and ability to draft a proper, detailed
email had assisted me from being fined a hefty sum of money. Many others might
just pay for the fine, but I had decided to try my luck with an appeal email,
which I was quite pleased about.
Therefore, it was a pleasant experience and I
felt fortunate for having the opportunity to have undertaken English as a
mandatory language subject in my years of education, allowing me to draft a
well-written appeal email. However, the process of improving the English
language skills is never-ending, and there will always be more to learn,
widening my knowledge on the language and its many subsidiary applications,
such as report writing and critical reflection.
The English language had
definitely made a positive impact on me in life, whether it is being used for a
simple conversation with others or drafting a letter or email for an
appropriate situation.
Hi Sebastian,
ReplyDeleteI'm really glad to hear that you managed to waive off your car fine. I totally agree with you that with good English writing skills, readers will be impressed and you have a higher chance of achieving your objectives of writing. By the way, I feel that your post is of relevance to the assignment and you managed to express your descriptive essay in a very concise manner following the GIBBS Model. I hope that you can continue to keep up the habit of improving your English language skills and should such situation arise again, you will still be able to write professionally!
Hi, Sebastian,
ReplyDeleteThe fact that you are an more of an English-speaking individual which gave you a good start. Your past experience have clearly shown the importance of constructing a proper formal email to other organisation. You have respond well to the assignment and followed the Gibbs' model provided. i think it would be better that you could include the full name of the organisation instead of mentioning it in short form.
Hello Sebas,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your feedback, I will follow the Gibb’s model closely for my reflective writing in the future!
I feel that you had used robust vocabulary words and descriptive words to create essence in your writing which made it really interesting for me. I can almost sense the joy of you receiving the email regarding your fine being waived off.
It is a remarkable post, keep up the good work! :)
Hi Sebas,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your post about how you are able to make use of your strengths to void the ticket for your offence. I could sense your pride and your happiness to have a good command of english. I'm sure you will do well for this module and now i know who to find if I get a ticket in the future :)
Job well done!:)